17A - Elevator Pitch No. 2
1. Pitch
https://youtu.be/77ZeUsYEhk0
2. Reflection on the feedback I recieved.
The feedback I recieved on my last pitch is that I needed to be more dynamic and slow down my speaking. I also recieved feedback on the actual content of my pitch and the tone and speed of my voice. I usually tend to talk fast when I'm nervous so I wasn't surprised that I recieved that feedback. I don't think I found any of my feedback silly, some of it was repetitive though.
3. What did I change, based on the feedback?
In the content of my pitch, I decided to address an opposing viewpoint to my pitch which I think would add another element and dimension to my revised elevator pitch that my first one didnt have. I also made an effort to be more dynamic in my gestures and facial expressions as well as changing and emphasizing points and words with my tone of voice. I think that doing this would add more interst to someone listening to it.
https://youtu.be/77ZeUsYEhk0
2. Reflection on the feedback I recieved.
The feedback I recieved on my last pitch is that I needed to be more dynamic and slow down my speaking. I also recieved feedback on the actual content of my pitch and the tone and speed of my voice. I usually tend to talk fast when I'm nervous so I wasn't surprised that I recieved that feedback. I don't think I found any of my feedback silly, some of it was repetitive though.
3. What did I change, based on the feedback?
In the content of my pitch, I decided to address an opposing viewpoint to my pitch which I think would add another element and dimension to my revised elevator pitch that my first one didnt have. I also made an effort to be more dynamic in my gestures and facial expressions as well as changing and emphasizing points and words with my tone of voice. I think that doing this would add more interst to someone listening to it.
Hey Kayla,
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of your curriculum because I do see the need for it. I do have some comments on your elevator pitch though. I think a first thing you should work on is projecting your voice more because I had trouble hearing you with all my volume on. Another thing is to practice standing in one spot without moving because the movement is distracting. Besides that it was good. Keep going!